you Dreamers and Troubadours
of the endless Journey.
Your Dream begins."
-Francis of Assisi
"Rise up
you Dreamers and Troubadours of the endless Journey. Your Dream begins." -Francis of Assisi
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Cayden
12/9/2013 12:28:04 am
“Dreams are Friends”
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Nichole
12/10/2013 12:37:26 am
I like your use of the dreams being friends and sticking with them.
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Ashley
1/20/2016 01:17:49 pm
A steady beat
Tristen
12/11/2013 03:53:47 am
Tristen
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12/11/2013 03:54:57 am
Analiese
Gwen
12/9/2013 12:29:35 am
Gwendolyn
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Sophia
12/10/2013 01:22:52 am
This a beautiful poem. You put in a lot of work. It is an inspiring message. I love the metaphors you had. I think you will be a great writer someday. Because this is long but has lots of meaning in it. Great job Tristen with the dream poem.
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Ashlynn
12/11/2013 03:26:05 am
I love the poem! Very nice rhyming, your poem is very meaning full!.
RachelMae M.
12/12/2013 02:23:21 am
I love how you used similes and how you you were inspired by Langston Hughes.
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Tristen
12/9/2013 12:34:12 am
Tristen
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ashley
12/9/2013 12:41:00 am
Ashley
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Mehgan
12/10/2013 12:37:48 am
Ashley that was a great poem. What i liked about it was that you used songs in it to inspire others. Also you have the important parts of the songs that you used..
Renee
12/10/2013 12:42:45 am
Loved it. My favorite part about is how you had parts of the inspiring songs we listen to in class.
Kirsten
12/10/2013 03:34:40 am
Ashley, I appreciate how you use so many different for example, in line
Ashlynn
12/10/2013 12:34:00 am
I love the poem! Very nice rhyming, your poem is very meaning full!
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Analiese
12/10/2013 12:36:55 am
Wow I'm blown away! The vocabulary is excellent it's astonishing.It's meaningful and it says something.
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Carl
12/10/2013 12:42:29 am
I liked the sounds that you put in your poem like "the wall still stands there motionless. And the "clock still clicks. Also I like your great ideas and imagination and creativity. Your poem was very inspiring and gave me a lot of good ideas about dreams. And and i liked that you gave non-living objects and gave them human characteristics.
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lauren
12/10/2013 01:16:58 am
I froze for a minute and thought about my life and realized i need to determine, my life! It wowed me.
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Alex
12/10/2013 01:45:15 am
This poem has good onomatopoeia at the beginning and good rhyming at the end. I like that you started off with a simile and the poem is a pretty long one too. This poem really inspired me. It had a good message to it.
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Jacob
12/10/2013 03:29:34 am
Tristen, your poem was very well written you used everything you were supposed to use on this poem i hope you get a good grade great job Tristen oh and nice words used in this poem.
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Leila
12/10/2013 08:25:33 pm
Tristen, I enjoyed this unique poem. It was excellent word choice, and description. It was so sincere. I think how the story was told was just marvelous. It was a truthful story with heart. It was speaking like a message that a small creature, like a flower with nothing, still though has a heart with a dream for the sun and water. Though I have to say, I absolutely adore this line in your poem, " The clouds darken over the wall that was once the most powerful dream keeper." That was so original. Great work!
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Analieses
12/11/2013 03:27:56 am
Wow I'm blown away! The vocabulary is excellent it's astonishing.It's meaningful and it says something.
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Analiese
12/11/2013 03:28:57 am
Wow I'm blown away! The vocabulary is excellent it's astonishing.It's meaningful and it says something.
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Megan Murray
12/9/2013 01:33:45 am
Megan
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Tristen
12/10/2013 12:30:49 am
I love it how you used different types of objects and use it with your dream poem, such as the pyramid. The only thing I didn't like was to soar past your dreams. To go over your dreams. To skip them or to finish them right away and move on? Over all, I loved this pom as well as he many others I read. This is one of my favorites.
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Tristen
12/10/2013 12:36:34 am
The poem had a great sense of inspiring message, a great theme and metaphor. I like this because it was the sense of writing was good and it made sense otherwise. Greatly, I loved this poem a lot.
Renee
12/10/2013 12:40:41 am
That was very inspiring because its telling you that dreams are important and you cant just fly to get to them.I like how you have a little bit of Langston Hughes. I like the saying of "hold fast to dreams."
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Makayla
12/10/2013 03:33:42 am
Megan, i really enjoyed the onomatopoeias in your story. In lines 1 and 3. "Locked them in a box and carry them with you .....CLICK. Life is a broken winged bird. When the times comes......CLICK." It was amazing poem.
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Renee
12/9/2013 01:50:49 am
Dreams
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Makayla
12/10/2013 12:21:47 am
Hey, Renee i liked you poem. It was amazing to read. The part i liked about your poem is when you had some of Langston Hughes
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Trevor
12/9/2013 01:57:44 am
Basketball is my dream.
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Trevor
12/9/2013 01:58:18 am
“Dream as if you live forever; live as if you die today.”
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Mehgan
12/9/2013 03:08:10 am
Dreams
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Ashley
12/10/2013 12:40:12 am
i like your meterfors,and your very inspieing.
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Ashlynn
12/10/2013 03:30:57 am
Mehgan, I enjoy your poem! The vocabulary is amazing,and the quotes make it pop out.You're right- "Never throw your dreams out a window." I hope you will continue working to be a doctor because its obvious you really want to be one. In line two you write "Is it gold that comes true?" Very creative!!
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Ashlynn
12/11/2013 03:20:28 am
Mehgan, I enjoy your poem! The vocabulary is amazing and the quotes make it pop out.You're right- "Never throw your dreams out a window." I hope you will continue working to be a doctor because it is obvious you really want to be one. In line two you write "Is it gold that comes true?" Very creative!!
Carl
12/9/2013 03:10:20 am
Dreams
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Analiese
12/10/2013 12:20:48 am
That's beautiful , maybe instead of scary terrifying.
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Nathaniel
12/10/2013 01:19:56 am
It was so inspiring. Carl your poem gave me a message. It cave me simile. Carl it was repetition.
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Nichole
12/9/2013 03:12:24 am
Nichole
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Leila
12/10/2013 12:42:50 am
I just loved this poem very much Nichole. I think you did some wonderful work on the details in this poem. I loved this line from your poem, "Midnight is the most wonderful opportunity of the night." It makes a person think about how midnight can be wonderful opportunity in the night. Like if a book your reading, you have an inspiration that the main character is having a dream then it makes you think what is my dream. In my opinion this poem is very inspiring to me.
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Megan
12/11/2013 02:00:49 am
Your poem was great. I liked your use of repetition. For example when you had kept repeating the word midnight that was great. Also I had like when you had said " Dreams abound at night."
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Makayla
12/9/2013 03:18:17 am
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Ashlynn
12/9/2013 03:20:08 am
Ashlynn
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Hunter
12/9/2013 05:50:06 am
Hunter
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Ryan
12/9/2013 06:39:58 am
I liked the poem
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Nathaniel
12/10/2013 01:17:03 am
Your poem had a great metaphor. Hunter the poem had great detil. The poem was so great. You had a great repetition. It was inspiring.
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Cory
12/9/2013 05:53:25 am
Dreams, they're like themes
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Ryan
12/9/2013 06:39:08 am
That was a good poem Cory
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Ryan
12/9/2013 06:44:25 am
What is Qs
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Emily
12/10/2013 01:11:24 am
Nice similes in the poem
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Hunter
12/10/2013 01:15:22 am
I really like it , its a good poem
Cory
12/10/2013 06:04:38 am
thank you yours is good to
Nathaniel
12/9/2013 05:58:16 am
Nathaniel
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Nathaniel
12/10/2013 01:24:35 am
My mind cuves me a smile. It was metaphor. It has a repetition. The rhyme.
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Celina Rose
12/9/2013 06:02:37 am
Today is the day
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Cheyenne
12/9/2013 06:07:57 am
Cheyenne
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alea
12/9/2013 06:09:39 am
Alea
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cory
12/10/2013 01:11:06 am
i liked the way you used on omatopoeia and repetition. your poem made me sad
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trenton
12/9/2013 06:15:26 am
Trenton
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Randi
12/10/2013 01:21:33 am
Nice poem bro!
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Harlan
12/9/2013 06:16:34 am
Harlan
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Emily
12/9/2013 06:49:46 am
VERY clever
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Harlan
12/10/2013 01:10:36 am
Thanks Emily your poem is good to!
Ryan
12/9/2013 06:51:29 am
Just read it and loved it
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Harlan
12/10/2013 01:13:30 am
Thanks Ryan I like yours to!
Cheyenne
12/10/2013 01:08:44 am
GREAT POEM!!
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Harlan
12/10/2013 01:15:36 am
Thanks Cheyenne I work hard with my step mom on it. Well not that hard. :)
Madyson
12/10/2013 06:16:32 am
Harlan great poem i love it its great!!! :)
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Emily
12/29/2013 02:07:10 pm
I love the way you used the letters of the word to write your poem
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Ryan
12/9/2013 06:28:55 am
Dreams are like clouds
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Cheyenne
12/10/2013 01:10:24 am
This is a good poem
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Cory
12/10/2013 01:15:49 am
it enspireed me
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EMily
12/10/2013 01:22:03 am
Amazing poem Ryan I love your word choice
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Emily
12/10/2013 01:24:59 am
I love your word choice.
James
12/9/2013 06:30:20 am
A Dream Deferred inspires
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Ryan
12/9/2013 06:47:49 am
Cool poem
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Leila
12/9/2013 06:32:28 am
Leila
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Nichole
12/10/2013 12:20:42 am
That is a really long poem Leila
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Tristen
12/10/2013 12:24:59 am
Amazing! I love the vocabulary and the heart-touching effects. I love the beginning as well, but that's human nature to criticize. I love the idea of how you kept on going and made this poem to make a human being realize that a dream is more important than their personality and how of they are "popular". I love this grand poem.
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Analiese
12/10/2013 12:25:28 am
Wow that's very powerful Leila!
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Analiese
12/11/2013 02:01:39 am
Wow!That's very powerful and though provoking Leila!
Cayden
12/10/2013 12:37:17 am
I like your poem it inspired me to do better and to not give up my dreams. I like the part that states, "A dark sky, And a rainy day in early May With no light." It really spoke to me.
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Alex
12/10/2013 12:38:18 am
Wow that is a really long poem. The vocab is really fantastic and it is easy to understand. I like the part about the tiger and the roar it really inspired me.
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Brendan
12/10/2013 12:39:03 am
This poem was amazing how you explained your feelings and sounds great!
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Harlan
12/10/2013 01:17:25 am
I know right!
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Trevor
12/11/2013 01:58:19 am
Great poem Leila
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Sophia
12/9/2013 06:34:09 am
life
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Ryan
12/9/2013 06:48:59 am
Best poem i ever read
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McGuire
12/10/2013 01:11:14 am
Great poem! Loved your vocabulary. It was the best one I have seen.It was inspiring.
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Sophia
12/10/2013 03:16:07 am
Thanks you guys that is nice of you to say those things about my poem.
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Emily
12/9/2013 06:36:10 am
O Uncle Brian
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Cheyenne
12/10/2013 01:12:17 am
this is a wonderful poem! LOVED IT
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Emily
12/10/2013 01:14:28 am
I wrote this poem because I have never meet my Uncle Brain so that is my dream
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Celina Rose
12/10/2013 01:23:11 am
Emily I LOVE your poem about your Uncle Brian. Is it really true that you never meant your Uncle Brian? I like how you put "O Uncle Brian how I wish to see you." It is very nice about your uncle.
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Hunter
12/10/2013 01:25:35 am
I think you will meet Uncle Brain some day.
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Sophia
12/10/2013 03:13:19 am
That is very nice McGuire. You did a great job. There was lots of efort.
Emily
12/29/2013 01:55:46 pm
I hope you are right Hunter because I want to meet him so bad I always get so everything I know even Family:).
McGuire
12/9/2013 06:37:52 am
McGuire
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McGuire
12/10/2013 01:16:44 am
I wrote this poem because the most powerful poems are not rhyming. I was inspired by Langston Hughes poems. And my best friend Nate he has let me dream my whole life given me hope in my dreams.
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Lauren
12/9/2013 06:43:55 am
Dreams
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Mehgan
12/10/2013 03:30:49 am
Wow, Lauren, your poem is amazing. I like how you used onomatopoeia. For example you wrote, " Crash. Beep!" I think that your poem has a lot of meaning and feeling and you put a lot of effort into it. Your first 3 lines are very heart touching.
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Preston
12/9/2013 06:45:52 am
Keep your dreams
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James
12/10/2013 01:11:39 am
Good poem Preston
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Hunter
12/10/2013 01:19:17 am
I really like this poem I think its one of the best
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Logan
12/9/2013 06:52:40 am
Logan Dreams
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Emily
12/29/2013 01:59:15 pm
I love your poem it inspired me.
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Alex
12/10/2013 12:11:50 am
Alex
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Trevor
12/10/2013 12:36:12 am
I like you poem Alex. I like your poem because it talks about how far you will succeed in life if you hold on to your dreams forever.
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Brendan
12/10/2013 03:20:39 am
Alex I like how you talk about you "There's no limit Try them all." It inspired me.
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Dean
12/11/2013 01:50:52 am
I liked your poem it had some good rhymes.
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Dean
12/10/2013 12:15:58 am
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Ashley
12/10/2013 12:16:46 am
“Parts of My Favorites Songs”
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Megan
12/10/2013 12:16:54 am
Megan
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Kirsten
12/10/2013 12:28:08 am
Kirsten
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Ashley
12/10/2013 12:34:16 am
I like your reptitions in the poem. And that your don't exarate. like "everlasting"and "life".
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Brendan
12/10/2013 12:33:28 am
Brendan
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Devin
12/10/2013 12:45:33 am
Devin 12/9/13
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Randi
12/10/2013 01:12:48 am
Randi
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Mya
12/10/2013 01:22:39 am
My dream loves me
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Emily
12/29/2013 02:09:23 pm
I love your poem it really inspired me.
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Nathan
12/10/2013 01:27:05 am
Nathan Benson
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Sophia
12/10/2013 03:22:31 am
That is very smooth poem. I love the 'my future is a bright star' that is my favorite part.
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Colten
12/10/2013 02:08:25 am
Colten
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Michael
12/10/2013 03:21:18 am
Michael
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Jack
12/10/2013 05:46:07 am
Dreams
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Kaylee
12/10/2013 05:59:20 am
Kaylee Elliott
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Brooke
12/10/2013 06:09:06 am
I love your poem Kaylee.It's very inspiring.
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Kaylee
1/13/2014 01:54:05 pm
Brooke I just love your poem it is "magical".
Brooke
12/10/2013 06:00:24 am
Dreams
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Kaylee
1/13/2014 02:07:24 pm
Brooke, Race your the bestest friends a girl could have.
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Race
12/10/2013 06:10:01 am
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Kaylee
1/13/2014 02:00:21 pm
BEAUTIFUL !!!!!
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Riley
12/10/2013 06:49:03 am
RILEY
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jerimia
6/22/2015 07:27:49 am
riley i love your poem it is very inspiring i used to think i was not worth any thing but now i realise i am.
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Riley
12/10/2013 06:54:36 am
I wrote this poem because these are the things i want in life, and i know i'm on a bumpy path, but i know at some point i can proceed with them. I loved all your poems, and i give hope to you as well.
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Analiese
12/11/2013 01:55:48 am
Analiese
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Gwen
12/11/2013 02:05:35 am
This is just gorgeous. I like the repetition in this poem. I also like the title and theme. I like that you said "Dreams are Forever."
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Tristen
12/11/2013 02:02:59 am
Tristen
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ashley
12/11/2013 02:09:30 am
Ashley
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Jacob
12/11/2013 03:14:56 am
The beautiful stars in the night sky
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Nichole
12/11/2013 03:19:00 am
Wow,Jacob.
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Celina Rose
12/11/2013 03:20:43 am
Very generous and beautiful visualization. Theme is great, independent-ism is good as well.
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Mehgan
12/11/2013 03:22:25 am
That was really good. Jacob
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Michael
12/11/2013 03:25:37 am
ya this poem is the second best one on this blog the first one is every ones becouse they all are amazing i agree with Nichole
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Tristen
12/11/2013 03:18:38 am
Very generous and beautiful visualization. Theme is great, independent-ism is good as well.
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Alea
12/11/2013 03:27:46 am
Alea
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Cory
12/11/2013 03:29:43 am
I liked the way you used on omatopoeia and repetition. Your poem made me sad.
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Trenton
12/11/2013 03:30:51 am
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Tristen
12/11/2013 03:33:54 am
Tristen
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12/11/2013 03:52:28 am
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Cameron
12/11/2013 06:15:23 am
Cameron 12/10/13
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alea
1/6/2014 01:58:39 am
thats really good
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Madyson
12/11/2013 06:37:53 am
Dreams
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RachelMae M.
12/12/2013 02:25:33 am
An Empty Heart
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cheyenne
1/28/2014 10:45:54 am
All these poems are very COOLL!!! Im sitting here on my couch, and im reading these and im thinking about all of these poems.Everyone did a wonderful jobb!!! ¦) keep up all the wonderful job!!!!! :()
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Jaxson
1/14/2016 09:59:02 am
Achievery
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